Topic: Tell about the best gift you are GIVING to someone this holiday season.
One thing I am giving someone is from the gift shop it is for my brother I got my brother a pen last year. This year I am getting him a cool toy I think he will like it I hope he will like it this year. I am getting my mom and my dad something this year I think my mom and dad will like it to. – by Audrie
One thing I am giving to my sistr this year is my love and hapenis to her this year. By Nick.
Topic: Write about how you can be generous this holiday season.
I was genares by like giving my friend sum of my toys zombie I gave him one of my zombie toys. My friend gave me a toy I said ok. My sister said she would give me a thing that scwerts out water. I would give her a lot of poky mone cards and sum cards with a sweley on the back it is black brown. I woud trade a difrent Ethan his last name is I for got it. But my sister said she would give me a poky mone card that the life is six hungrent and thrddy life. Then I would give her sum money like a tow dollars to day. Now I will give my mom a lot of stuff but my mom and my dad will only open tow presents. By Payton
I was genaerous to my friend for giving some of my play toy to him. I also gave three tops we wer playing with at school at recess. I play with my friends some of the time I gave water to him. He gave me water for being genaerous to him to. I gave my friend a leaf that looked pretty awesome to him to. I like it wen peple are genaerous to me to. I some times eat with my friends at lunch By Sam
When I was generous I gave my brother a painted rock. I have a rock painting set. So I gave my brother one. I also gave my mom one and my stepdad. I gave my mom and my stepdad one along time ago. I gave my brother one for his last birthday. I gave my brother the last painted rock. But I asked for another one. The end. By Cheyenne
When I was generous I gave my mom a gift of love from my heart .Then I gave my dad a gift from Walmart . Then I gave my brother a toy box he liked it. Then I gave my granmpa a gift of joy . Then my friend Cheyenne got a hair dresser. Then Sam got a funny animal . kalab got a life time gift .Zake got a friend ship braslet . By Lindy
Every week, we spend time having friends give us some suggestions on how to make our writing better before we turn it in. This week, Cheyenne and Delaney had a great conversation about more than just fixing periods and capitals. They were talking about adding details, adjectives and prepositions to make the writing more interesting for a reader! Great job working together, girls!
