Thursday, December 13, 2012

Posted by Mrs. Koehn On 10:42 AM

Delaney_and_cheyenne_talking_it_out

Every week, we spend time having friends give us some suggestions on how to make our writing better before we turn it in.  This week, Cheyenne and Delaney had a great conversation about more than just fixing periods and capitals.  They were talking about adding details, adjectives and prepositions to make the writing more interesting for a reader!  Great job working together, girls!

1 comment:

  1. Thankyou Delaney for helping me with my writing.

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